Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. smartphones cause more harm than good for our society
Even though there is a popular agreement that smartphones are harmless for our society, I have different point of view. I strongly agree that smartphones cause more harm than good for our society. The basis of my opinion is medical and social prospective that I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
Medically, overusing smartphones can impact people health as well as increases psychological illness rates. As individuals spend hours and hours navigating on smartphones, they experience constant daily stress which considered the most prevalent trigger for life-threatening diseases such as autism, depression and anxiety. Along with this, being adducted to video games and social media, they will be discouraged to exercise, which in turn will increase their daily tension. In other words, if people not controlled their desires to use smart devices, they will not be able to fight off any potential mental illnesses or diseases. As a result medically, spending more time in front of screens unquestionably has negative impact on not only people health but also on their life span.
From a social standpoint, using smartphones people makes it hard to them to strengthen their bonds with each others. However, abandon using smart devices enable people to get the chance to come in contact with individuals from different backgrounds, allowing them to discuss an array of topics. Moreover, when this happens, they will be able to share their emotions and feelings, so they become close to each other. Indeed, being consumed by smartphones, obviously, directly related to losing their interpersonal skills.
In conclusion, for reasons stated above, I encourage the society to use less smartphones that can harm us more than benefit us. If they do this, they will discover that it has a countless number of medical and social benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31740614334 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8701712134 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621160409556 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8879401419 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194946377278 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789854127719 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135037457943 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14639727692 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111404844632 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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