Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In modern era people have always been involved with some different type of technology that Internet has been one of the most influential technologies ever seen. Certainly, some people if asked would agree with the statement that Internet is actually a tool that provides people huge precious data and information while others would mention that question depends on a great deal of factors; for example, somebody like parents would be worry about this easy access to information compared to benefits of Internet. As far as I'm concerned, I adopt a firm position that Internet is one of the most significant and vital technology that help people to be accessible to many valuable information particularly if information to be useful and convenient. In what follows I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
First of all, it's important to consider easy and time consuming access to information. By way of example, I can recall 15 or so years ago that my city did not access to Internet. In school period we had to go to library and spent a lot of times to study many books that often it was not properly useful because there are not concentrated information while nowadays I see my nephew could do his homework and school project with the help of Internet in a few times and more easier rather than the past.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that awareness. In fact, Internet help us out to be aware and familiar with every event all around the world, that is, it is not only problems when you access to enormous information and data about your environment but also this knowledge and awareness give me kind of sight and view by which we could analyze events and anticipate future happenings and adopt best decisions. For instance, nowadays people in my country through some virtual pages on internet could be aware about all politic problems and this awareness force authorities to answer huge amount of questions of people on their some negative choices or decisions.
Finally, Internet is specific kind of resource data and information that all people from usual people to scientific would use it as a dependable and useful source. Today, Internet is most important resource of data and information by which people could do their specialized works. To illustrate that idea let's consider the following example. I remember in university period, I was using newest papers about my project field through some specific sites of Internet. It helped me out to accomplish my project with a good idea and took the best grade from professor.
By way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, I'm of the opinion that in most case easy access to much information through Internet not only is not threat but also provide many precious information that help people to save their time, makes awareness and is the best resource of data and information of all kind of people. Even though Internet could provide much valuable and significant information, it is highly suggested that parents should be careful and meticulous about their children and juveniles because they are very susceptible against some pages of Internet and would be a great menace of them and their future life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ared to benefits of Internet. As far as Im concerned, I adopt a firm position that...
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Line 1, column 664, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much valuable information', 'a good deal of valuable information'.
Suggestion: much valuable information; a good deal of valuable information
...gy that help people to be accessible to many valuable information particularly if information to be usefu...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...the help of Internet in a few times and more easier rather than the past. Another equal...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the newest'.
Suggestion: using the newest
... I remember in university period, I was using newest papers about my project field through s...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ion, based on arguments explored above, Im of the opinion that in most case easy a...
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Line 9, column 183, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much precious information', 'a good deal of precious information'.
Suggestion: much precious information; a good deal of precious information
...not only is not threat but also provide many precious information that help people to save their time, ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2700.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95412844037 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69621399402 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477064220183 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 869.4 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.136688001 48.9658058833 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.823529412 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0588235294 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320753795618 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970777830767 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543813291755 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177784759844 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573241554161 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.