Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public.
In today's convoluted world, a plethora of events happen every day and people try to gain trustworthy information about them. In this regard, nowadays, there are a number of people who subscribe to the view that the media such as TV, newspaper and Internet, to name but a few is a trustworthy source for gaining information about different events, while others are of the opinion that these medias spread inaccurate news in the society. As far as I am concerned, I wholeheartedly concur with the former idea for quite a few reasons, two monumental of which are elaborated hereunder.
The first exquisite reason coming to mind is these medias want to attract myriad of people to buy or watch their news; as a result, sometimes they spread inquorate or even false news to attract more audiences. To shed more light on the issue, an empirical study over 5000 users of Internet across The United States and Canada demonstrates that only a minority believe the Internet news, for they think news websites change or exaggerate their information to attract more users. However, what I mentioned above might not be overgeneralized to all contexts. There are some news websites which contain both accurate and valuable information.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that nowadays, a great number of events happen every day in our world , and medias have to disperse this news quickly; therefore, they have to work harder and faster compared to the past. With this in mind, when people work faster and have to deal with a huge amount of work, they may make some mistake. A group of researchers in statistics department of Columbia University studied the relationship between the amount of work that an employee has to do per day and the performance of his or her job. The results revealed that there was a great increase in the performance of employees when their employer assign less work to them. Thus, doing some minor error in news will be acceptable when we consider these factors.
To sum up, notwithstanding there are invariably some exceptions which are excluded from general rule, it can be concluded that the number of inaccurate news in various medias has increased during past few years. All in all, I firmly recommend that people gain news from two or three sources in order to be sure about the accuracy of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88442211055 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68652507452 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550251256281 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5520867074 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.857142857 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214054257511 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667261695686 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441795220456 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123900503646 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266993330046 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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