do you agree or disagree with the following statement, student not teacher or administrator should be in control of their education
Education plays a very important role in our lives. Teachers and administrators can provide us guidance, moral support and also they are well experienced to design our academic curriculum by assessing our strength and weaknesses. In my opinion, I strongly believe that, teacher or administrator should exercise control over student’s education rather than students by themselves.
First of all, students are not matured or experienced enough to deal with their education all by themselves in order to avoid negative consequences on their academic career. Education is a complex system, which should be designed by real expertise. Teachers and administrators have been in this field for many years and they gained valuable experience and excellent teaching skills. They have been trained appropriately to teach students by scheduling systematic education to students, step by step depending upon their learning abilities and brain development. So teachers provide them constant encouragement, clarify their doubts and helping them in every aspects of education. On the other hand, if students given a chance to control their own education, they will definitely end up in negative consequences that includes, without appropriate decision, without understanding basic education and without strong foundation of knowledge, students will be more confused and their education is going to suffer without the guidance from expertise.
Further, students have an opportunity to communicate face to face with teachers and administrators and also teachers will prepare them to succeed in academics and future career as well. Teachers and administrators are there to help students at every step by one to one interaction and always help students with great patience. Further, if we come across any complicated subject, teachers are the first one to make us understand. They will give additional information in the classroom, which is not available in any textbooks or in any resources. They provide strong foundation of knowledge and key information in all subjects, which is very essential for students to succeed in their future career. They provide us class discussions, debate and such opportunities will definitely provide students to think in different perspectives. As a result, it enhances student’s critical thinking and broaden their knowledge in every field.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, teachers or administrators should control student’s education instead of students themselves, because students lack maturity and experience to design their own education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ents to succeed in their future career. They provide us class discussions, debate an...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256880733945 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.142201834862 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0802752293578 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0412844036697 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0756880733945 0.0685040099705 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116972477064 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0321100917431 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.20155974806 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0366972477064 0.0309702414327 118% => OK
Particles: 0.00229357798165 0.00188951952338 121% => OK
Determiners: 0.0435779816514 0.0887237588012 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0206422018349 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00917431192661 0.0139019557991 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2588.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 385.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.72207792208 5.86048508987 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.451948051948 0.338922669872 133% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.397402597403 0.251872472559 158% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.311688311688 0.174417080927 179% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.2 0.112833075102 177% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20155974806 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.2208946564 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6470588235 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2392310103 48.84282405 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.235294118 120.699889404 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 62.3873185638 45.7405998639 136% => OK
Elegance: 1.56637168142 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224340048448 0.300154397459 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115532351994 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0662187809376 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.499057599853 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173487525086 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973188412776 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078673440751 0.0781384742642 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351940949857 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0848189760624 0.067059652881 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181054960213 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438348233005 0.0618886996521 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.