Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the students are more influenced by their teachers than their friends because there are so many reasons support my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, the students are more influenced by their teacher than by their friend. The children always try to imitate the people whom are younger than them and consider them as a hero. Additionally, the child always tries to attract the young people behavior by acting in the same way that the young people behave. So, the students consider their teachers as their models. However, the student’s friends are on the same age and their characters do not attract him.
Another reason why I advocate that the students are very effected by their teachers is the teacher’s way in solve the problem. The students today spend most of their time in the school and that gives the teacher the ability to detect each student character. So, the teacher can talk with each student by the way that he prefers in order to advise him. Moreover, the teachers learn how to communicate with the children and have good experience to sole each child problem in effective way. While the friends lack the experience to advice each other, so they cannot trust on themselves to avoid the troubles.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the children are more effected by their teachers. Teacher can act as a teacher and as friend for the students by helping, listening and playing with them. Eventually, he will take their parent place in the school. While the friend can do just single things for each other.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinion are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, by the way, first of all, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85522788204 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50432282288 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495978552279 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8749982738 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.611111111 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378112863564 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124866788397 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119019969472 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207591890532 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142037438554 0.0645574589148 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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