Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors lawyers or business leaders

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders.

Submitted by dyx0819 on Sun, 04/16/2017 - 22:54

Salary is a good criterion of a job about its criteria and contribution to the society. If a job is quite demanding and boosts the development of the society, the wage can be very high. When it comes to teachers, some people argues that they don’t deserve a high salary as high as doctors, lawyers or business leaders. However, I believe that they should pay the same, if not more, as those job listed before due to its high requirements and huge contribution.
First, a good teacher should adapt their teaching methods accordingly and update their knowledge constantly. Many people believe that the reason why doctors, lawyers, and business leaders are that they cannot apply the same principle to every patients, lawsuit or business cases. They should continue learning and analyze every case specifically, which requires them to have strong professionalism and adaptivity. The same rule applies to teachers. They have to keep learning to know the cutting-edge knowledge and the new application of the techniques or theories in order to give more practical classes. They also deal with every unique student, who from different families, having different personalities, specializing in the different area. For example, the teacher might be more encouraging to introverted students and they pay much attention to form students ability to be prudent and careful when having interactions with creative and extroverted students. Teachers should be very familiar with every student and adapt their ways to every student, which can be quite demanding and difficult.

Second, a good teacher enlarges students knowledge base and teach them important lessons. Teachers are those who foster future doctors, lawyers, and business leader. Since they can earn so much money, teachers, who give them the basic knowledge and the learning methods, should be paid the same as well. Take business leader as an example. Teachers not only guide students to the beginning of their career path, teaching them accounting principles or marketing strategies but also share analysis methods and foster students’ business sense so that people can make progress even without the help of teachers. Moreover, students can learn very important lessons from teachers. For example, teachers will correct us when we cheat in the exam so that we won’t use too many additives to cheat the customers. They also tell us the importance of helping others, leading to the willingness of being a doctor to save people’s life. Teachers inform us to be a good people, contributing to the society and not involving in the immoral behaviors or even the crimes. Therefore, teachers make many contributions and they deserve higher salaries.

In a word, the teachers’ salary should reach the same level as doctors, lawyers, and business leaders.

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Average: 7.3 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30289532294 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84751344088 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503340757238 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.218386842 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.52173913 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5217391304 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200510254262 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620260466411 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538141024972 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144619095198 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424336801121 0.0645574589148 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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