Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Whether cars are going to be used in the future is an open question and has enlivened a lot of studies recently. With the constant improvements in technology in almost every aspect of life, it may be hard to answer such a question. I personally believe that there is not going to be any room for cars in the transportation industry in near future and I will explain my reasons in the following essay.
First of all, the advent of airplanes brought some striking advancements in the field of aerodynamics that this would eventually lead to the total disappearance of cars. Many years ago people would not believe that trains could replace the old cargos pulled by horses, the same thing is happening right now. Almost all of the long-distance trips are taken by airplanes which indicates its ease and efficiency. On the other hands, cars are time-consuming vehicles. The only advantage of cars could be that they are budget-friendly, which I believe that in twenty years with the lack of fossil fuels, would be a totally different story.
Secondly, regulations on safety have gone through a lot of changes a couple of last years and cars still lack some crucial safety elements even with the new Improvements in the car safety. Accidents, explosions are just a few examples of the potential threats of cars, which of course are much more less in other flying vehicles. Unfortunately, I have lost a friend in a car accident. The other driver was drunk and my friend was just passing the street. After the crash, the car driver escaped. There were some witnesses that saw the accident and took her hospital but it was not enough and we lost her.
Long story short, I strongly believe that the future is a time of no on-land transportation. With all the new ideas and innovations coming into mass production, perhaps in future cars just are used as relicts of our era.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...me thing is happening right now. Almost all of the long-distance trips are taken by airpla...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
...reats of cars, which of course are much more less in other flying vehicles. Unfortunately...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73006134969 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77858578669 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3196838324 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191738488972 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547641352031 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513270033672 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110051899532 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493368397118 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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