Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
These days universities and colleges are the places for all the activities like politic, social event, art, sport and also education. I believe, most of the people see universities as a community that needs to have all of these activities. As a matter of fact, I agree that all the departments like the sport should receive the same amount of budget.
First and foremost, University is the place that people can gain experiences from various aspect and it is the place that people can find friends and understand other culture. Students and teacher always communicate with each other and university is the most significant place for social activities. Thus, I think social activities should receive same financial support.
Second, sport and exercise helping people to have entertainment and be healthier in their life. The Sports department also engage some people to be a professional athlete. These professional athletes can bring to our country proud by winning medals in a world champion. For instance, when I was in college, one of the students from physics department won a gold medal in Taekwondo.
Classes and libraries are the important part of the university and college, on the other hand, the University is a community that needs to have all places like sports department and social activities besides others. The amount of money for all departments should be equal because university and college should be able to serve diverse people with the diverse idea, request and should be somewhere that help people for better future in various areas.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, thus, for instance, i think, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74664942156 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498039215686 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1788468049 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223018708972 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911153320271 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858653611981 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140067263585 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671459224835 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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