Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Universities and colleges are one of the fundamental things in every society. some universities tend to spend a lot of money for sports and social activities to an equal degree to the amount they spent for classes and libraries and I totally agree with this for many reasons.
First of all, I believe that sports have the main role in students lives which allows them to improve themselves. Having a lot of sports activities at the university will provoke the student to take part more in useful activities and cut their unhealthy habits like smoking or drinking alcohol. As a result, this will lead to more healthy and creative students.
Secondly, universities that have a lot of sport and social activities will get more students applying every year. Nevertheless, this means they will get the money they paid for these activities back from the new students. So this might a tool for improving the university.
Thirdly, social activities may help to make a friendly atmosphere at the university. Especially for the new students, these activities can help the student to be more involved in their new society. For example, on the first day of m school, I attended a meeting for all the new students like me and it was a great way to get friends easily. Moreover, the activities also can be used to cut the boundaries between professors and students.
I think that the more sports and social activities we have in our universities, the more healthy and creative students we will have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i think, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8431372549 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75607329784 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513725490196 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5614443682 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134073360517 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525825237022 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512104630209 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872306002704 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418979200048 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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