Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion."
In a students life sports and academics hold different places. They are both important for the holistic development of the student. I agree with the above idea that universities should spend equal amount in the students sports activities as they give to the libraries.
A well stocked library is always an asset for any student . Students spend a lot of their time in the library studying for exams and working on assignments. Thus Universities should maintain a library with diverse material .They are thus an integral part on the University .
We should not forget that sports play an equally important role in the students life. Lets consider the euphemism , A healthy mind resides in a healthy body. Students should try to maintain good health while in an academic course. Physical fitness complements mental agility. Playing sports is one of the best ways to stay fit. Students should participate in different types of sports like badminton , tennis , swimming , cricket . All physical activity is useful . But they should remember not to strain themselves.
Next, we know that team sports help build character. Playing in a team we learn to co-operate and think more in terms of team success than individual success . These invaluable lessons learnt on the field can go a long way in the journey of life . They
cannot be acquired from library books or classroom teaching but through active participation. For example , being a cricket captain in university can be useful for leading a team in the future. Leadership skills can develop thus through sports.
We can also include sports as a great stress buster for students. In an academic life, students may gravitate towards alcohol or other drugs during stressful phase. Active participation in drugs is known to be a stress buster and can prevent above situations.
We should also remember that major league players are recruited from university teams. It can provide a platform for students who are interested to build a career in sports as well . They can represent country in international events and make the country proud.
There are several benefits of engaging in sports activities for students , some direct and some lateral.Libraries are, on the other hand , an indispensable part of a students life.Thus universities should spend on both libraries and student sport activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2110817942 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84062476218 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53562005277 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.537165007 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1481481481 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.037037037 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7037037037 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212159735557 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601793575608 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690658596519 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107795962455 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755608768591 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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