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Assignment projects play a fundamental part of pupils' graduation grades. Some students prefer to work alone avoiding any critical carelessness situation from other students. In contrary, others disagree. They think sharing their graduation project with one or two classmates would be more than helpful. As far as I am concerned, I agree with that students would learn more efficiently if they share their working projects with others. For many, this work would be time-consuming, their working plans easily prepared. Also, they would have a fun time together. Following is a brief explanation of my perspective.
First of all, most universities put higher marks for their students' graduation assignments. It is pretty critical in few situation to take the risk of your grades when you share that projects with others who are careless or uncooperative. However, this is very rare cases. Furthermore, it is very hard to find the free time or squeeze yourself into your studying schedule; therefor, if you take that assignment on your own, you will find yourself lost at the end of the year. On another hand, with your classmate you can work on a part of the project and you friend will finish the other. For example, I collaborated with two friends in my graduation assignment. The subject was tough. It asked us to bring up one hundred heart attack cases from the neighborhood hospitals. Without my friends' help, we would never finish that project in a month. In fact, collecting data alone is not an easy thing in a country lacking the internet facility.
Besides, time-consuming benefits. It is easy enough to find yourself with others working on the project. Each project needs from the students several steps to do. Some of them, collection the information resources from the libraries, from the internet or modern researchers. Also, how to write that assignment effectively. It's academic language, the cases presents. And, who would be brave enough to explain this project to the class and the professor? It is very stressful if you do it alone. Take, for example, my nephew Charles; he hates sharing his studying materials with others. He asked his physiology teacher to present his assignment alone. Unfortunately, his work was unwell organized, unplanned; his resources were feeble. He got the lower score among his peers and broke his graduation grades.
Least but not the last, it is undeniable fact working with together brings a great fun time. Because, when you study out of the class. You have plenty time to talk about yourself, introduce your hobbies; especially, at lunch or break time. For example, when I worked with my classmate Mary, I did not know her at the beginning, but my professor chooses us to be together in the project. And that how I know her very much. We enjoyed traveling together, chatting together. In many situations, we had a fantastic time.
All in all, based on the examples that I elaborated above, I think it is an excellent idea to share the project with other students. Your work would be done faster, best organized and spending a wonderful time.
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I agree with that students would learn more efficiently
I agree that students would learn more efficiently //I agree with something
this is very rare cases.
this is a very rare case.
it is undeniable fact
it is an undeniable fact
Some of them, collection the information resources from the libraries, from the internet or modern researchers.
Some of them collect the information resources from the libraries, from the internet or modern researchers. //need verbs
We enjoyed traveling together, chatting together.
We enjoyed traveling together, and chatting together.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.256 21.0
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 39 15
No. of Words: 517 350
No. of Characters: 2493 1500
No. of Different Words: 257 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.768 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.822 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.662 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 162 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 135 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 97 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.256 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.153 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.359 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.229 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.375 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Assignment projects play a fundamental p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...brief explanation of my perspective. First of all, most universities put high...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'few situations'.
Suggestion: few situations
...n assignments. It is pretty critical in few situation to take the risk of your grades when yo...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eers and broke his graduation grades. Least but not the last, it is undeniable...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with together brings a great fun time. Because, when you study out of the class. You h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'i think', 'in fact', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208053691275 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.145973154362 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0838926174497 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0503355704698 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.110738255034 0.0685040099705 162% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102348993289 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0318791946309 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79873586058 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218120805369 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00167785234899 0.00188951952338 89% => OK
Determiners: 0.0838926174497 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167785234899 0.0209618222197 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011744966443 0.0139019557991 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3108.0 2387.08602151 130% => OK
No of words: 517.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01160541586 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328820116054 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272727272727 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208897485493 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141199226306 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79873586058 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 61.1550512081 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 39.0 20.6684587814 189% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 13.2564102564 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0850289222 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 120.699889404 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2564102564 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.358974358974 0.644075263715 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 40.5291375291 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.11475409836 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466494507108 0.300154397459 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0707254145973 0.103427244359 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0842465869192 0.0752933317313 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.343371940937 0.497263757937 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142430075524 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113392189546 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101668860219 0.0781384742642 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.271824069303 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0829329857339 0.067059652881 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28143734332 0.210909579961 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809054417156 0.0618886996521 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.6433691756 183% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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