Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
The complexity of the modern life has required people to become adept in many new skills. One of these ability highly thought of as essential for people is the capability to plan and organize. A controversial question in this matter is that is it necessary for young people to also attain the ability to organize and plan the events in their lives? Although some might deny this necessity for adolescents, I believe it can become a great asset for them throughout life. Some reasons for my viewpoint are as follows.
The bustling nature of the present is not only confined to the lives of adults, but also to the younger generation. Children and adolescents are faced with a heavier daily schedule when compared to the young generations of the past. This heavy schedule might sometimes leave them overwhelmed, making them feel incompetent and anxious. If they are familiarized with the techniques of time management and organizations, they could plan their daily, weekly or monthly schedule in a way most suitable for them. So, being a skilled organizer will ensure that they will have time to tend to all their activities and also, boost their self-confidence.
Becoming familiarized with the skills of management and organization will also prepare the younger generation for adulthood. I believe, upon embarking on adulthood, the people who have been trained in time management and scheduling will have elevated chanced of success. This is because life is mainly about seeking opportunities and using the time we have wisely in order to prosper into a successful person. If a child has not been introduced to the concepts of organizations, he/she might not be able to manage his/her time properly and thus, might dismiss many of the opportunities that come his/her way.
Another reason for the necessity of early familiarization with the techniques of time management and organization is that it could lead to independence and sense of self-sufficiency. In the modern days, people have become less dependent on each other and in need of more private space. If a person is an accomplished planner, he/she could ensure the independence desired and acknowledge more private space. This is because he/she can manage the time needed to tend to all the activities without the need to gain assistance from others.
By and large, considering the busy lives we lead today, planning and organization have become of the most necessary skills needed to succeed. Being familiarized with the concepts of time management early in life can be very beneficial for people. Among the many great advantages it has, it can help boost the younger children’s independence and self-confidence and ensure them of a prosperous future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ability' or 'these abilities'?
Suggestion: this ability; these abilities
...become adept in many new skills. One of these ability highly thought of as essential for peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02199549654 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477477477477 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4212446183 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7619047619 5.45110844103 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223778928653 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722398926978 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065090304735 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129529284071 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813358558361 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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