Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
We live in an age of technology. Every day new gadgets and devices are introduced to the market. Using these devices has become an essential part of every day life. As a result, some people believe this up to date life brings complexity and therefore, the younger generation need to be scheduled and organized. However, in my point of view, the modern life makes our lives easier in two ways.
First of all, technological advancements in different aspects such as communication, transportation, health and education make our lives more convenient. What I mean is, nowadays people easily travel to different places including far an near distances, thanks to the developments made in the transportation systems. In addition, in current era there are many hospitals and clinics available. As a result, families do not have any problem related to healthcare. What's more, students get a good education in their schools or university by the means of computers and their knowledgeable professors.
Second, this developed and modern life suggests individuals many tools of planning and scheduling. For example, there are many websites available on the internet that help people mange their time. In this way people can optimally allocate their time to different tasks and upcoming events. Furthermore, online counseling centers are available to those who are in need of getting advice from expert. As a result, this modern life provides many beneficial resources for young individuals to overcome their difficulties and to do a superior job.
In conclusion, latest developments and advances in science and technology helps people in various aspects. For instance the improvements in healthcare, transportation and education has a very positive outcome. What's more, the new devices such as laptops, smartphones and tablets which are widely used by individuals, have many useful applications and more importantly they can connect to internet easily so people could have access to different websites. In this way every one can utilize time management tools and be aware of organizing techniques. As a result, the modern life becomes easier and more enjoyable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...ravel to different places including far an near distances, thanks to the developme...
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Suggestion: distance
... different places including far an near distances, thanks to the developments made in the...
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...have any problem related to healthcare. Whats more, students get a good education in ...
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...d to do a superior job. In conclusion, latest developments and advances in science an...
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... education has a very positive outcome. Whats more, the new devices such as laptops, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36578171091 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05360034618 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581120943953 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8773092062 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.95 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143656589084 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428866955729 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390594861405 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862184359189 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322699455076 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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