Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Educating the children is a great concern for so many parents.The new generations have faced with so many technological advancements that could be used for good porpuses. However, many parents are worried about side effects of cell phones, online games, and social networking website on the education of their children. In my opinion, these high-technologies have made easier for parents to educate their children than the past. Here are my reasons which will be elaborated in the next paragraphs.
Firstly, cell phone or other communication devices could be used for educational porpuses. Now we see many new applications for a cell phone which children could use it to increase their knowledge about an especial topic. For example, parents could buy the Wikipedia application for their children's cell phone. It could be very beneficial for children to know further about any topic they want to know just by typing the word.Besides, some kinds of cell phones or tablets offer an educational software for children. I remember the time I was children and I installed the English language software on my cell phone. This software had 50 lessons and each lesson was contained with introducing new words, grammar or other sections. In my experience, this software helped me much in learning the English language much faster than my friends in the high school.
The second point to mention is that social networking web sites have provided a great platform for new generations to ask a question or share their ideas and opinions. A group of students who have mathematics course in the high school may create a mathematics forum in which they ask questions they do not know from each other. This networking website provides the students with an exciting environment while can enhance their knowledge on the specific topic. Sometimes, a student may propose a great idea in the social network website which could ignite an innovation or invention of new things in the minds of other students.
Lastly, the children become better educated when they are more geniuses. In my opinion, to be considered as educated persons, each child should learn required skills to live better in the new world. In my thoughts, online games are not a threat, even they provide a great opportunity for children to learn how to take the risk, how to decide in difficult situations and etc. The children who play a game with his friends learn how to think strategically to win the game. This skill is very important and educated children need to learn much about the mentioned skills.
To put in a nutshell, considering all reasons I mentioned, I believe the cell phone, online games or social networking offer a great opportunity for children to be a better-educated person.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254473161034 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.151093439364 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107355864811 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0417495029821 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0556660039761 0.0685040099705 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0994035785288 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0318091451292 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77866191235 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318091451292 0.0309702414327 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10337972167 0.0887237588012 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0218687872763 0.0209618222197 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0218687872763 0.0139019557991 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2763.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 459.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01960784314 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357298474946 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281045751634 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20697167756 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122004357298 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77866191235 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.698236266 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8571428571 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4819066947 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.571428571 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.9617180205 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.552 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347853065001 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116389115536 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0609644305387 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523026679993 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148887177771 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130111798864 0.114077575197 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491165015345 0.0781384742642 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328427027403 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0531131148094 0.067059652881 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220239697354 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247316905129 0.0618886996521 40% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.