do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
in order to be weel-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.
Today, the world is living in the area of technology revolution, therefore, there are a lot of sources to get information, Tv, the internet, social media in addition to the traditional ways, like radio and newspaper, so, everyone have to be aware regarding the accuracy of the information that he gets from any source, basically, because there are a huge amount of inaccurate, unhonest and unbiased information, so in order to get the truth, everybody have to seek the information from different resources, if all the resources have been said the same thing, then, he can trust the information that he have been gotten.
Everyone wants to get the right information regarding the subject that he concerns about, like politics issue, health, economic, education and a lot of things else, admittedly, now a day that would not be easy because there are a tremendous amount of unbiased tv and radio channels, websites, they spread a lot of rummers and a lot of fake news about all things, furthermore, they may misleading the people on purpose to earn what they are aiming to like financial benefits and so on, thus, everyone have to be conscious and aware about what he watches or hears, so the most appropriate way as many specialists in the media advise the people, is to seek the information from different resources, then they can believe it, if all the resources are agreed about it. Some people say that would be distracted and wasting of time, but on the other hand, if the person is seeking the true information, so the results are worthing the time and the efforts.
Getting information from different resources also help the people to understand the information from different perspective, like when someone listen to the political news, it will be crucial to hear the same thing from different channels to understand the another side of view, for sure each channel has different owner and different sponsors that force them to adopt this perspective. Although some people prefer one channel over others because they adopt the same opinion, but that ideally lead this person to be ridged and un-resilient or flexible regarding another side of view.
With that being said, personally, I think it is better to get information from different resources to be sure from it and to rely on it, so everyone in that crazy world today has to search more and more and asking a lot before believing anything that he had been read of hear.
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...are worthing the time and the efforts. Getting information from different resou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86057692308 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71460120945 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492788461538 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.1344086022 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.483652004 48.9658058833 444% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.0 100.406767564 336% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.3333333333 20.6045352989 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 5.45110844103 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231945765473 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120370059863 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585554826031 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152601789616 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251247619941 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.1 11.7677419355 307% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 58.1214874552 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 10.1575268817 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 10.002688172 630% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.0537634409 294% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.247311828 615% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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