Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By the advent of Internet and emerging advanced communication devices, people are now more freestanding compared to the past. Although some people adamantly claim that the traditional dependence on parents is still existent in some countries, other people take an opposite point of view. Personally, I am of the opinion that most of the younger people are more independent from their parents. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, younger people are more educated compared to their parents. In the past, people were dependent to their parents because of their experiences. By contemplating this in mind and considering the Internet as a provider of a huge amount of data, individuals, nowadays, can search about whatever they didn't know or have no idea about it. Certainly, it would be a better an easier solution, moreover, it would suggest more innovative and novel approaches compared to your ancestors’ way. For example, I can remember when I was selecting a university to pursue my passion, my parents had no idea since they had no experience of going to university. Thanks to the Internet, I could gain the required information by surfing on the web.
Second, in the current decades, living standards have increased tremendously. Now, people want more freedom in their lives. My nephew's experience is a compelling example of this. He is a fourteen years old teenager. He is studying in elementary school. I can remember when I was a youngster, my mother decided all of my clothes since she thought that I am immature to do this task. Compared to my situation, he is more free than me because he gives his opinions in different subjects instead of following his parents’ decisions such as their home's decoration or in place for vacation.
All in all, people are more free in making their decisions because they are more educated than the past, and have more access to technology like Internet. Besides, their standards for their lives have heightened.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, second, so, still, for example, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03264094955 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9208009215 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6953037725 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2631578947 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247613118565 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776293942233 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735526309793 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159552369746 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294103323715 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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