Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The Cars are frequently discussed in public in many aspects. One of the most controversial topics is will the use of cars decrease in future. Some people may hold the view that there will be less cars in use than there are today due to the convenience of public transportations or infinite expenses for the owners. However, some others may take opposite viewpoints for reasons like the increasing of personal income would make cars more affordable and convenience of owning cars. From my vantage point, the former view seems to have rationale aspect in comparison to the latter viewpoint. I will elaborate on my idea through two noticeable reasons.
First of all, the traffic problems are unavoidable if everyone use their cars. The government in many countries realized this problem. Then they release policies and plans to develop bus and railway system which will make the publuic transportations more convenience. That is the reason why public transportations will gain more popularity in the future and people will take public transportations instead of cars. As we can see in developed countries people tend to travel by buses , trains or even airplanes. Some people might argue that there are few public transportations in countryside or rural area and it is not convenience to travel around. I agree with this point but in this case you don’t have to buy your own car. There are many options for example, you can rent car just for one or two days to travel around that would not be affect the number of car owners.
In addition, it costs more to own cars and the costs of owning cars are limitless. Once you buy the car, you have to spend big amount of money then pay the installment every month with high interest rate. That still not enough, you have to pay for gasoline, maintenance, insurances and taxes. It is said that in the future our world will face oil and gas deficiency problem, gasoline price will be higher, this problem affects directly to the car owners and costs a lot more. For example, the cheapest car in my country is $10000; you have to make a down payment for 25% of the price, which is $25000, and pay the remaining amount off in five years with 5% interest rate. For miscellaneous expenses is around $200 per month. After consideration all costs, the total cost of owning cars per month for 10 years is $350 minimum compared to public transportation, which is only $300 maximum per month. This strengthens the idea that people will use fewer cars in the future.
From the aforementioned above, there would be reduction of cars in used because of development of public transportation and increasing cost of owning cars that would affect. More people will use public transportation. Therefore, the number of cars in use will decrease.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...topics is will the use of cars decrease in future. Some people may hold the view that the...
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Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...le may hold the view that there will be less cars in use than there are today due to...
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Suggestion:
... idea through two noticeable reasons. First of all, the traffic problems are u...
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Suggestion:
...ey release policies and plans to develop bus and railway system which will make t...
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Suggestion: ,
...countries people tend to travel by buses , trains or even airplanes. Some people m...
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...not be affect the number of car owners. In addition, it costs more to own cars a...
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Suggestion:
...e number of cars in use will decrease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82773109244 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7742923428 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0020254883 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.92 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.04 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22028910515 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690870345867 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528726131248 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150917442819 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131146754287 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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