Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern life is easier than life in the past.
Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
The turn of the twentieth century defines an era of convenience on your fingertips. Modern life surrounded by the myraid of technological innovations is definitely easier than in the past .Several points are made in the following paragraph to establish the same .
Smart phone revolution started with the advent of the first smart phone by Apple.The seamless connectivity with the internet through the smart phone has made common tasks simpler than in the past. Navigation via Google maps , Booking cabs through via UBER and communication via Live video chat. These are the examples of some conviniences that may not have been possible a few decades ago. In the past people were dependent on the snail mail.Calling some one was expensive especially in another country. Today all of this has been made possible. Studying in a foreign country , we can always connect with friends and family back home easily and at low cost.
Secondly ,health care systems today are improved and life expectany has increased.Medical research is advanced and we have found cures to several disesases that were once fatal or incurable in the past .
Third would be ease and importance of education today . Now so much information is available at the fingertips, easily , anywhere and at a low cost. Previously education was a monopoly of the rich . Today it is easily accessibile across all sections of society. Scholars working on projects across the globe can share their work and collaborate easily . This is the educational revolution era, learning and sharing knowledge have never been this convenient. In fact Right to education is a fundamental right today in my country India .Even general inquiry about any subject is way easier now. Google and Wikipedia are the go-to places to learn about anything . In the past people relied on libraries and issued books or they would have to consult experts.
Today we have reached a place in our history where most countries have democracies. We have a government of the people, for the people and by the people . We live in a fair society and believe in equal rights for men and women , the discrimination against races has also been removed. In the past slavery was dominant. Thus it is easier to live in today's world. We also have problems today and some parts of the world are war torn. Some communities are still oppressed , but we have progressed in several ways . Today we acknowledge Gay rights, though not in all the countries.It is definitely a start though.All countries have issues but most have moved forward with respect to quality of life and education .We live a more liberal society that strives to provide opportunity for all sections than in the past.
It is important to note that technological innovations have brought their own challenges.People are more distracted today and more prone to mental disorders than in the past . Obesity has also increased. People led a simpler life in the past. Today we seem to be in a rat race. Race definitely existed in the past as well but it is more competitive today than ever before.
The technological innovations have changed the way we live our lives today in the evolved democracies than in the past. As they say , what once was a luxury , is a necessity today . Thus life today has definitely become easier in many ways as compared to the past , though it does have its challenges .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thus, well, in fact, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2795.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 568.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92077464789 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81533902181 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 908.1 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1136486151 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2058823529 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91176470588 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.5376344086 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138127088801 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362856453531 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523017821593 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906953722413 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543316660914 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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