Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
the advertisement today tend to be the crucial step in marketing of any product, especially for new product, the first impression of customers is so important, the first impression is definitely relying on the quality of the advertisement and how it can persuade the customers with the product, besides, advertising companies tend to equip their advertisement with everything to make it persuasive and influential. Personally, I agree that products seem to look better in advertisement than they really are and I don't believe any advertisement because most of the production companies and the advertising companies, for sure, not honest enough about their product, their target just selling the product and get money, as long with this, they don't deserve my trust.
primarily, the advertising companies almost all the time used to exaggerate about the product in order to make it attractive, they use an advanced technology, bright colors, great music, furthermore, sometimes they pay tons of money to celebrities to participate in their advertisement, for example, recently, I watch car advertisement, one of the celebrities drive the car with high speed, then he start talking about the quality and how this car is pretty comfortable, my friend like this car and bought one, unfortunately, his new car is not as fast or comfort as the advertising mentioned.
oftentimes, advertising companies tend to hidden a lot of undesirable facts about the product to make it seems like a perfect product, and for sure persuade the customers to buy it, to illustrate that, a lot of kids snack advertisement use misleading information in purpose, quite often they talk about the vitamins and minerals in this snack and how healthy it is, on the other hand, they never mention anything about the preservatives and other toxic ingredients it already contained, therefore, the parents have to be aware and conscious before believing anyone of this kind of advertisement.
Admittedly, sometimes the advertisement are so honest, real, gives the customers a precise information about the product, they never try to betray the customers, or get benefit of them, they just try to help them do a good choices, however, people couldn't know which one say the truth and which is not, so they have to still aware before buying any new product.
in conclusion, advertising companies are profit organizations, they work hard to improve their income by making a good advertisement, also, the production companies just focus on their own benefits and how to earn money, to state it more clearly, they are two sides of the same coin, so they have to create good image for their products, and obviously they depict their product in way much better than the real .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, look, really, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12304250559 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03773239117 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505592841163 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.1344086022 368% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.469207152 48.9658058833 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.666666667 100.406767564 380% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.5 20.6045352989 362% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.8333333333 5.45110844103 474% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291727715647 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164822207291 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077000168555 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162010168774 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810535301777 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 11.7677419355 339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.63 58.1214874552 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 10.1575268817 317% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.6 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.002688172 310% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.0537634409 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.247311828 312% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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