Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the invent of it, tv has always played significant role in each society. Individuals know that what happened around the World by the help of it. Even though, some people believe that movies and television have more adverse effect on the way the young behave, I consider that its positive effects have more weight than negative. The lines will shed light on my viewpoint.
First, it is important to consider that tv boosts the knowledge of a person. Todays, there are a lot of programs such as documentaries, news on the tv. it is easy to learn new knowledge by watching these programs. Especially, documentaries are so beneficial. The young people can learn new cultures, ideas, cities and countries.
Secondly, in addition the the importance of knowledge, there is another subtle point which deserves some words. After a tough day, I would be amazing to watch a movie with the member of family or watching the favorite program. it helps to forget our problems for a while. furthermore, According to a recent research which conducted at MIT University by the team of reputable scientist, watching a movie reduces the stress and help to ease tension. Therefore, scientist suggest that it has benefits watching movies.
To sum up, taking all aforementioned arguments into the account, one cannot deny that television makes our life better than before. we have enjoyable time when we watch it . They give the news about our planet.
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... we have enjoyable time when we watch it . They give the news about our planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 241.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99585062241 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74866391844 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672199170124 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5735070775 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8235294118 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166943885505 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359992552076 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920305822711 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898099559778 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904373848869 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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