Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
When it comes to the issue of that children should not allow to waste their time playing computer games, some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reason for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, When it comes to the issue of the children should not allowed to play computer game because it wastes those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I Believe that the computer games should not allow to play by children because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion it is widely understood that the computer games waste the children’s time. Instead of playing with their friend the children spent time on computers. So, this will reduce their abilities to contacts with each other. Eventually this will make it hard for them to make a new friendship in the future.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of restricted the children’s time that they spent it playing games on the computer in order to keep them active. If the children spent most of their time playing sport games like football, basketball, or whatever they prefer that will help them to be more active. Also, playing sport games may help the child to be a famous player in the future.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the computer games have negative effect on the children, because such games will restricted the children imagination and that in turn will reduce their thinking abilities . Moreover, computer games will effect on the children ’ eyes.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wasting
...issue of that children should not allow to waste their time playing computer games, some...
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Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
...to the issue of the children should not allowed to play computer game because it wastes...
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Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'playing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: playing
...ssue of the children should not allowed to play computer game because it wastes those o...
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Line 1, column 528, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'playing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: playing
...hat the computer games should not allow to play by children because there are so many r...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'restrict'
Suggestion: restrict
...n the children, because such games will restricted the children imagination and that in tu...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...urn will reduce their thinking abilities . Moreover, computer games will effect on...
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Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ilities . Moreover, computer games will effect on the children ' eyes. From wh...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235135135135 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.154054054054 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0675675675676 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405405405405 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.072972972973 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105405405405 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0297297297297 0.0351676179071 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50759479275 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0351351351351 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113513513514 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0432432432432 0.0209618222197 206% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0189189189189 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1965.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 332.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9186746988 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313253012048 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237951807229 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165662650602 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0843373493976 0.112833075102 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50759479275 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487951807229 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.8117456178 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7142857143 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9192058066 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.357142857 120.699889404 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.644075263715 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 47.5094664372 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.38383838384 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433569205973 0.300154397459 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165219307369 0.103427244359 160% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0978887724628 0.0752933317313 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621464145936 0.497263757937 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19116252583 0.151897553556 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184580741077 0.114077575197 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818044124687 0.0781384742642 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357451518587 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.126138183558 0.067059652881 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249052786656 0.210909579961 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107626944625 0.0618886996521 174% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.