Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Generally speaking, many students are influenced by people they meet or know since they have not reached the maturity in their thinking and attitudes. They are influenced by their teachers, friends, sports stars, fashion models or other many individuals. In my opinion, if we want to have a comparison, I believe students are more influenced by their friends than by teachers. Here are my reasons which will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
The first point to mention is that students spend more time with their friends than teachers. Students attend the classes with their friends, hang out with them in campus environments or go with each other to trip. Therefore, students have more interactions with their friends than teachers which enhance the chance of influenced by their friends. For example, two students that go to the school with each other, write their homework at one of their homes or go to the cinema or other places may be greatly influenced by each other in the ways how to behave and think. They may learn from each other about how to respond different situations since they face many of these events when they were with each other.
The second important thing to express is that many of students talk about their personal issues with their friends than teachers. If a student has a concern about the future exam, he may immediately talk about that with his friend to get his advice. Many students prefer to talk with their friends about their bad experiences in the past with their friends since they are more close to each other. In these cases, they will learn about their friend's views and attitudes about most personal things. For example, I always had a talk with one of my best friends at the high school every time I got a bad score. My friend always advised me not to be disappointed with bad marks and encouraged me to work harder than the past. Now, when I look at that times, I think he was very influential to me about how to work hard to get the best results.
Finally, students try to find a successful person in their life to be like them. Many of students prefer to choose one of their successful friends as a role model since they believe they all have same difficulties and obstacles to pass in order to be successful. For example, a student may choose the first ranked student in his class a model for himself and tries to learn from his as much as possible. In this condition, the student will be substantially influenced by his friend about how to prepare the exam, how to take notes and other things.
To put in a nutshell, taking account that students spend much time with their friends, share their personal issues with each other and choose their friend as a model, they will be more influenced by their friends.
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206766917293 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.144736842105 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0883458646617 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357142857143 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.103383458647 0.0685040099705 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.144736842105 0.118717715034 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0187969924812 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43466489341 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.046992481203 0.0309702414327 152% => OK
Particles: 0.00187969924812 0.00188951952338 99% => OK
Determiners: 0.0789473684211 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015037593985 0.0209618222197 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0206766917293 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2778.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 489.0 408.028673835 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68098159509 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288343558282 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20654396728 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141104294479 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.081799591002 0.112833075102 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43466489341 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402862985685 0.524397521467 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.2022517414 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2857142857 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1828234307 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 43.9401110137 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.30463576159 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407770435356 0.300154397459 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164033685037 0.103427244359 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0670453617031 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.566262511136 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144338458977 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182759367722 0.114077575197 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107420763952 0.0781384742642 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.408751485105 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0871363321673 0.067059652881 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301154962175 0.210909579961 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761213426709 0.0618886996521 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.