Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that teachers are significant to every society because they can influence people in their future lives. In my view, teachers are greatly respected in society nowadays the same as the past because of three reasons and following explanations further elaborate on this perspective.
First, people know the value of teachers and their important for society at any time. Parents are concerned about their children, and their future. Teachers have a significant role on children's future because teachers; besides teaching science, teach them how to think, how to behave, and how build their future. When I was at high school, I had a math teacher, who was really influential and educated. Moreover, His articulation was outstanding. After the term, all the students got a great score and most of them became interested in math. All the students and their parents loved him and respected him. They also request the school to admire the teacher publicly. As you can see, teachers are greatly respected nowadays.
Second, their salary is higher in comparison to that of in the past. It is apparent that if a job is considered valuable and influential among people, the salary for that job will increase because people think people whom possesses a decent job deserve good salary. My father is a retired teacher. His salary has been increased dramatically within the last 10 years, which shows how important the job is.
Third, the new technologies and sciences make the need of teachers more crucial. Students need experts to teach them new complicated sciences. As an illustration, I just started to learning data-mining. At the beginning, I started to learn on my own but it was not any improvement. After that, I got a tutor and I could see considerable improvement in a short time. This experience taught me that how teachers are needed more and more.
In sum, from arguments, which was explored above, we can reach the conclusion that not only are teachers respected, but also they are considered as a necessity to society. People know the value of their job and respect them through many ways.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, third, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01133144476 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7622735428 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541076487252 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8662686743 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9130434783 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.347826087 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125199738326 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039534577105 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438756867904 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747125355935 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413043269097 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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