Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that, nowadays, friendships has played a prevailing role in every individual's life. It is accepted that communicatin with the people, specially friends help the human being to having sence of satisfaction. Therefore, a plethora of people are the leading proponents of the claim that the more people have a few number of freinds over a long time, the more they have sense of happiness. On the other hands, others hold the exact opposite perspective and believe that not only do people who a few friends have not success but also the human having a lot of friends are more happiness. I contend that former has higher wheight. To substantiate, the following paragraphs will elucidate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the nearly friends are the best people that you can trust them. The young persons having a freind but a good manner one are the people that don't experience the lonly mood in their life. These real friends help their friends in all circumstances such as: helping in works, financial or metally. Take a personal experience as an example; when I was a M.s in university, my best friend assist me to teach Latex and Matlab. So important is it for me, that he help me in a bad situation. These friends lead us to having more happiness.
Furthermore, it is an indisputable fact that people who have the ability to make new friends easily invariably are alone; althought, they have a lot of friends surround them. Had a person selected many friends, all of them have him expection so that he doesn't have a sense of satisfaction. The noteworthy statistic, revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country shows that 85 % of people that select many friends, they are most of the time alone and in a manner of sad.
To recapitulate, all the enumerate reasons lead us to canclusion that having a real friends is better than many ones but not real ones. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are some reasons and examples, challenging the claims, which are not mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78551532033 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74489425014 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543175487465 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2768111757 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.058823529 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209517909883 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613445297369 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435254187504 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118300134939 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252568402956 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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