Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
When it comes to issue of which is better in travlling alone or with group led by a guide , some people may agree with the statement that travlling with a group led by a guide is better than travelling alone and give us sound reason for their beliefs. On the other hand some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponent could provide us with strong purposes to support their thought. I believe that travelling with a group led by a guide is a great idea because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that travelling with group led by a guide is better than travelling alone because the guide puts the plan for the trip depending on his experience so he will take us to the most important places and tells us what should we notice there. All that will be so hard to know if we are alone in place that we did not visited before.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of that travelling with a group led by a guide is better than travlling alone because being as a part of group will be so interesting and will help people to know each other and make a new friendship that may persist even when those people will back home. In contrast being alone will make the trip boring and not joyful especially in the roads
Finally, it is a well-established fact that travelling with group is better than travelling alone because we are in a new city so we do not know what to eat there and where we can find the restaurant which suit us so being with a group led by guide will make that easier for us.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in but my opinion and other people’s opinion are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...o the most important places and tells us what should we notice there. All that wi...
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Suggestion: visit
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Suggestion: contrast,
...en when those people will back home. In contrast being alone will make the trip boring a...
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...act that travelling with group is better than travelling alone because we are in ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'in contrast', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.168865435356 0.229887763892 73% => OK
Verbs: 0.197889182058 0.158761421928 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0712401055409 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0712401055409 0.046263068375 154% => OK
Pronouns: 0.065963060686 0.0685040099705 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137203166227 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.065963060686 0.0351676179071 188% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.43278367042 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0211081794195 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110817941953 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0422163588391 0.0209618222197 201% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0316622691293 0.0139019557991 228% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1949.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 359.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42896935933 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.222841225627 0.338922669872 66% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.161559888579 0.251872472559 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116991643454 0.174417080927 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.08356545961 0.112833075102 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43278367042 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448467966574 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.0423978612 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6684587814 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 39.8888888889 20.5533526081 194% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 114.152378127 48.84282405 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.555555556 120.699889404 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8888888889 20.5533526081 194% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 0.644075263715 224% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 56.0448777468 45.7405998639 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.11023622047 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357481858076 0.300154397459 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.168154249482 0.103427244359 163% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0990037735423 0.0752933317313 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641209888345 0.497263757937 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.249040951705 0.151897553556 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174366814496 0.114077575197 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103756461948 0.0781384742642 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.316384604395 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.110805529364 0.067059652881 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229287305609 0.210909579961 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800791798387 0.0618886996521 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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