Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As time goes by, people get farther from each other. But does it imply that the family bonds are losing their significance? There are mixed views on this. I am of the opinion that the importance such relationships is fading away.
First of all, in times of high unemployment and scarce job vacancies, there is an ever-increasing competition among people to possess a job; There is no job opportunity for those without specialization and professionality to attain one of the jobs on offer. Only the most assiduous students can live up to employers' expectations. As a result, people, as they grow up, don't have enough time to spend on tasks other than their works such as getting involved in family relationships.
In addition to not having time, people also cease to maintain their relationships with their relatives inasmuch as they do not have much in common. The gap between generations is widening at an astounding pace, therefore, youngsters can not communicate efficiently with elderlies. Moreover, cousins of almost the same age can not relate to oneanother since they do not share interests and they have different fields of study, and thus, think differently. For example, my cousin and I are both 25; She has studied literature while I have studied physics. We see everything from different perspectives. She is really sentimental, and is also not interested in discussions. So, instead of spending my time with her, I would prefer to go out with my university friends.
Dispite the fact that many depriciate relationship with extended family, there are still people who really appreciate it. They are of the view that it's beneficial to keep in touch with extended family. They have weekly meetings where they get together, have a cup of coffee, and discuss various topics. It believe what they do can be good from different aspects. For instance, they can soothe their nerves and get refreshed. They can also benefit from giving their minds some hours of relaxation so that it can assimilate its weekly intake.
To sum up, even though there are families who appreciate the significance of extended family, once narrow gap among people and their extended family has been broadened because of compulsions of a busy life and lacking common ground.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'believes'?
Suggestion: believes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04533333333 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89597298944 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589333333333 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.8080724694 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0952380952 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61904761905 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770770250665 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239632275318 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258365558419 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047506015568 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176119100143 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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