It is undeniable that life style is a popular topic which has caused heated debates for a long period of time because it affects everybody in his daily lives. Based on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, people differ greatly in their attitudes towards this issue. We find that some people holds the idea that life today is more difficult; on the contrary, others maintain that nowadays we have more comfortable and appropriate life that the past. In my opinion, life today is more easier and convenient than it was in the past. There exist countless factors which influence this opinion; two of those are technological and health services advances.
The main aspect to point out is that technology make our life more convenient. Today, there are a lot of technological tools and services around us that we used it in our daily lives. All of this tools are made to solve one of the human problems or try to make it easier. For example, cell phone is a popular tool which most of people have it. Using this product everyone can access to you everywhere everytime, so your accessibility have not any dependence to time or space while in the past if you want to call to someone else you must go to certain place that there is a phone and clearly it make our life more difficult and in appropriate.
Additionally, advancements in health science make our life more comfortable. Our grandparents remember when people die from a very simple diseases which are easily solve today. For instance, a few days ago I read an article in a magazine about people who die because of cancers which are curable, today.
In summary, technological facilities and health services advances are two important reasons that make our life more easier and convenient than the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ch has caused heated debates for a long period of time because it affects everybody in his dai...
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Line 1, column 503, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... the past. In my opinion, life today is more easier and convenient than it was in the past....
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t we used it in our daily lives. All of this tools are made to solve one of the huma...
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Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ple, cell phone is a popular tool which most of people have it. Using this product everyone ca...
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Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ce that there is a phone and clearly it make our life more difficult and in appropri...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
...mber when people die from a very simple diseases which are easily solve today. For insta...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'solved'.
Suggestion: solved
...a very simple diseases which are easily solve today. For instance, a few days ago I r...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...wo important reasons that make our life more easier and convenient than the past.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in summary', 'in my opinion', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249249249249 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.141141141141 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0960960960961 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510510510511 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0750750750751 0.0685040099705 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12012012012 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.018018018018 0.0351676179071 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6875623076 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024024024024 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.003003003003 0.00188951952338 159% => OK
Determiners: 0.0750750750751 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00600600600601 0.0209618222197 29% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.027027027027 0.0139019557991 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1779.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 306.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8137254902 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31045751634 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225490196078 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107843137255 0.112833075102 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6875623076 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 58.548704132 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8571428571 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2782295614 48.84282405 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.071428571 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 44.406162465 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.44943820225 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262728933006 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0926486372926 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0660748780071 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519557348645 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188259424522 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102271313119 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676576409482 0.0781384742642 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.235582243813 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105170157479 0.067059652881 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163041331901 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547370675197 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.