Do you agree or disagree that people should not have to pay for public transportation that they use
Nowadays, there have been many public transportation ways
for people to use. These have provided a lot convinence to
people. Then some people claim that we should not have to
pay for these public transportation. In my opinion, paying
for public transportation should be encouraged.
Firstly, the public transportation is one of the
fundamental systems of our city socity. Citizens who have
services also have the responsibility to support and keep
it. Also, if the transpotation is totally free, the chain of
money of transportation system may be broken.
Some people may say it will save people's money. Well,
though free transportation will save some money and the
goverment will surport it. But the money that goverment has
is also from citizens. this part of goverment outcome may
refect on the tax. And some complex problems will engage,
Who will keep those transportation ways? And where does the
sallary come from for those workers who keep and work in the
transportation system?
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...ms of our city socity. Citizens who have services also have the responsibility to...
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...ay say it will save peoples money. Well, though free transportation will save som...
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...nsportation will save some money and the goverment will surport it. But the money...
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...tation will save some money and the goverment will surport it. But the money that gov...
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...r those workers who keep and work in the transportation system?
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...se workers who keep and work in the transportation system?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 407.700716846 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0379402451 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 212.727598566 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8127327418 48.9658058833 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.3076923077 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4615384615 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.53405017921 397% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304821229201 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119161857006 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119566312799 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103059424533 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912931319859 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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