do you agree or disagree? The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character?
Whether humankinds’ clothes reveal their personality or not? That is the question. Although a substantial number of people believe that the way people dresses is a good indication of their character, personally speaking, I disagree with this widespread belief due to some reasons. I will elaborate upon the momentous reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, a great many people dress similar but they have fundamentally different personality. Without doubt, in a good many schools or workplaces, students or employees wear uniform. How are we able to understand the personality of a person whenever he is in his work place? How can we distinguish them if we want to rely on their clothes for understanding their reality? In my reckoning, not only in work places, but also out of work places a diverse range of people dress similar yet their personality differ. According to resent research conducted by the Isfahan University of Technology, there is no way to categorize university students by considering what they wear. In a word, having similar desire clothes, people do not have similar personality.
Second, a person dress differently in different places and situations. In fact, the way that an individual dresses is not unique. Does it mean the personality of a person is ever-changing? I believe no! To exemplify, I would like to give an example of this. Whenever I go out with my co-workers, I try to dress a little formal; in contrast, whenever I am with my friend, I wear casual clothes. Besides, the way that I dress is depended on not only people with whom I would be, but also different locations. As an instance, never do I wear formal clothes when I want to go rock climbing. I a word, an individual dress differently in different occasion and location which makes revealing its personality absolutely impossible.
In the final analysis, according to about-mentioned points and examples, I firmly disagree with this statement that dress can talk our personalities inasmuch as a great many people wear uniform or wear similar clothes yet they have absolutely different features. Besides, a person his self wears differently in different situations and locations, so it is impossible to become aware about his personality. Then, why not accept this fact our clothes are not rooted in something deeper, in that case our personality? I highly recommend pay attention to people’s behavior in order to know about the person rather than his clothes.
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Suggestion: am
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11851851852 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13090898437 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8687476709 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1304347826 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6086956522 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276434634292 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802948490805 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652234529248 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183921697768 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346161371797 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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