Do you agree or dissagree with the following statement?
Sports are unnecessary for college and university students
No one can deny that are both positive and negative aspects of sports at college and universities. If I was forced to choose one side, I would definitely say that are more positive aspects than negative ones, for a number of reasons, and I will develop this ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, many students are very poor, and, they can only make university because of the scholarship, that also can be trough soccer, football, basketball, etc. My friend, who was in a difficult finance situation, could only stay at the university because of the soccer scholarship that he have, and, nowadays he have a medicine diploma and still playing soccer for a important time in my native country.
Secondly, everywhere in the world soccer and football are important sports, because they develop culture and the economy, like, when I went to the stadium one time, I spend over than hundred dollars, just in the parking lot and food. Sports are well know over the world, and, would be a mistake to remove than from the universities.
In light of the mentioned reasons above, I would definitely disagree with the idea that sports are unnecessary for college and university students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: has
...olarship that he have, and, nowadays he have a medicine diploma and still playing so...
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...ne diploma and still playing soccer for a important time in my native country. ...
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Suggestion:
...occer and football are important sports, because they develop culture and the eco...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...the stadium one time, I spend over than hundred dollars, just in the parking lot and fo...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...e parking lot and food. Sports are well know over the world, and, would be a mistake...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, as for, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90099009901 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67378066212 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6592412412 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.428571429 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149588884117 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775261783875 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849214678189 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108969557226 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985894051738 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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