Do you think success is important, or it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when you fail.
With the great improvement of the social productivity, all graduate students in every year need to be more competitive in order to find good jobs. So many people claims that the success is the most vital thing they need to pursuit. However, there are still a lot of people believe that having a happy and optimistic attitude is more important even when people fail. As I concerned, I totally agree that the positive and optimistic attitude is much more important.
Remaining in happy and optimistic even in a hard time will not only make us happy but helps us to keep trying to see more possibilities beyond the failure and success. If people only work on the purpose of success, they would limit their eyes definitely, since the success is the only dimension and standard they could find. However if people could have a open mindset with positive attitude, there would be more standards to rely on and people could reflect themselves in other perspectives. For example, my friend he did not good in his last university application, since he was too focoused on the success in admission instead other valuable aspects. He was too stressed out and didn't relax and stay happy enough. Then he finally got results with unsatisfiction. In this way remaining happy and optimistic is really necessary.
Also, the a happy and optimistic mindset would be very helpful to our mental health. When people are urged to be successful, they would stressed out mostly. However, if we do not stay health both physically and intellectually, the success is nothing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d stay happy enough. Then he finally got results with unsatisfiction. In this way...
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... optimistic is really necessary. Also, the a happy and optimistic mindset would be v...
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...alth both physically and intellectually, the success is nothing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, really, so, still, then, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8897338403 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74440967604 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8052457406 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24696185816 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851400346362 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697479121574 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164087202835 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377662139782 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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