Following are three choices to protect the local environment. Which one do you think is the best and explain why.
1. Plant trees and create gardens
2. Local shops do not provide consumers with plastic bags
3. Take public transportation and reduce the use of private cars on local roads
In my point of view, the best way to protect environment is plant trees and create gardens because it is more feasible than other two methods. The reasons will be demonstrated as follows:
To begin with, planting trees and creating gardens in the cities or our hometown could improve air quality so that the environment could support plants and animals to survive. In other words, more animals and plants in the earth, more benefits to our planet. Besides, it can not only greening cities, but also can prevent global warming.
Second, limiting local stores to provide plastic bags does not help in environment conservation at all, because people could still buy plastic bags from any stores. Also, you cannot prohibit those stores selling plastic bags since manufacturers will keep producing plastic products, which means it is difficult to prohibit these manufacturers.
Third, it is not practical to encourage publics to take public transportation, because people are always thinking of themselves. They will consider their profits rather than saving the planet. Unless you have a regulation for people who do not take public transportation will get fines, and it will turns out that probably people will follow the rule. If not, then this is hard to practice.
In summary, planting trees and creating gardens are better than limiting people's plastic bags usage and encouraging people to take public transportation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, still, then, third, in summary, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 228.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29385964912 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70259086504 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4984359082 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.727272727 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21461664954 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683474556289 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499155901416 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10813754683 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210037735354 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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