A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either to go on vacation or to buy a car
Your friend asked you for advice. Compare your friend's two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose
I reckon that an overwhelming number of people would rather choose to go on vacation than simply by a new car.But from my point of view this decision is absolutely irrational.And i can support my point of view by providing several reasons listed below.
Initially, by buying a car a person opens a huge range of possibilities.At any time, under all circumstances he or she will have an oppotunity to go wherever they want.It can be a vacation or just the way back home.It can save time and even money and definitely can be a savior after a long working day.Furthermore by buying a car a person can roam all around Europe in a comfortable vehicle.
Another reason why i think that buying a car would be an incredibly correct decision is that car is necessarily should be in a family or every self-respecting person should own a car. I reckon that it is an obligatory vehicle. For example,in my country almost every family has 1 or even 2 cars.Because it is correct investment and will pay off in the near future.
And finally,by merely buying a ticket on vacation a person do not benefit the future. People tend to forget the details of their travelling shortly.And all that money that they spent on vacation will go to waste. As to buying a prestigious car ,it can show people your high social position.Because ,i guess all people try to show off and try to seem authoritative.
To wrap everything up,if take into consideration all reasons that i listed above,i would defenitely advise my friend to buy a new car.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, i guess, i reckon, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64312267658 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05695126057 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9609823525 48.9658058833 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.777777778 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129204560648 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513788083485 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030885292873 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711030257407 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322608761217 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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