In general people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.
The notion that people are living longer today is a fascinating one and one that I believe in. I assert that several factors contribute to longer lives. Ubiquitous and advanced health-care facilities, technology, and efficient means of exercising and physical activities are remarkable contributing factors to longer lives. In the following paragraphs, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that health-care facilities are widely available everywhere and for everyone. In the past people faced conspicuous difficulties when they were in need of immediate medical care, especially in rural areas. People had to commute a long and tiresome distance in order to reach a medical center. Today, however, there is a plethora of health-care facilities and hospitals available in almost every region, in most of the developed and developing countries. Thus, people do not need to travel a long distance, neither do they bear any difficulties to seek medical help. Furthermore, these facilities are equipped with the most advanced medical devices with which doctors are able to detect numerous diseases with ease and convenience.
Moreover, another important enabler of longer lives is the broad availability of technological devices and the Internet. There are lots of gadgets available that can measure your vitals such as blood-pressure and blood-sugar. They are small, easy to use, and cheap. Therefore, virtually any person with a decent source of income and minimum knowledge can afford to buy and use them. Furthermore, the Internet hosts thousands of websites with respect to health-care and medical knowledge. People who seek medical care, can first visit a few websites in order to acquire sufficient knowledge prior to visiting a doctor. Also, people can have a hands-on experience with healthy diets, and how to cook healthy food. A great number of websites afford cooking recipes with which people can retain their health.
Admittedly, not to mention the effects of modern means of exercising would be an oversight. Only by exercising correctly and efficiently, can people maintain their physical and mental health. Scientists have advanced enough to obtain appropriate methods of physical activities. Experts can assign exercising tasks to people with respect to their needs and physical problems. For example, an expert may give a neck exercise to a person with neck-ache, through which he or she can alleviate his or her problem. In addition, laboratories are producing beneficial exercising devises everyday which enable people to exercise more conveniently in their desired locale. For instance, you can buy a fixed bicycle and exercise for hours in your home without the inconvenience of going outside.
All in all, nowadays people are living longer than in the past. The advent of technological devices and the Internet plays a pivotal role in people’s improved health. In addition, widely available and advanced medical centers as well as professional methods of exercising enabled people to maintain their health for longer times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 747, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...food. A great number of websites afford cooking recipes with which people can retain th...
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Line 7, column 580, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...producing beneficial exercising devises everyday which enable people to exercise more co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2627.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47291666667 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96085499922 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527083333333 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5555059765 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8214285714 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127910902356 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413026834069 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493820317486 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922080159307 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517464984665 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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