Groups or organizations are an important part of some people’s lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
In business, education, sports, politics, and in many areas of social life, we see people come together in groups and then share ideas. Why are groups or organizations important to us? From my point of view, I would like to list three main reasons for it: to communicate, to share common interests or purposes, and to learn from others.
Firstly, people take part in groups or organization to communicate. According to Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs, besides physiological, safety needs, people have natural desire for being belong to a group. The group can be a family, a group of friends or an organization. In the prehistoric time, human lived in groups for their safety and to protect themselves from external threatens like: wild predators, natural disasters…But in the modern society today, people still have enormous demand to be included in groups because they need the connection and interaction with human’s society. Without interacting with anyone, people feel extreme lonely, depressive and become introverted, even isolated. Groups and organizations give them special environments to talk, share, and have a fulfilled social life. For example, there are many groups for the single which connects people who are single, divorced, or widowed all around the world. By joining in the groups, people meet more new friends and can easier find happiness. That’s why for communicating is one of leading roles of groups.
Secondly, groups or organizations are where people share similar interests and purposes. Various kinds of interest can be listed, from music, sport, or making craft, to academic ones. In the groups, people organize many activities related to their interests or to meet particular purposes. For example, I take part in a group with other people who all care about Vietnamese culture. Every week, we spend at least three hours to study and present about cultural fields like: the origin of Vietnam’s ethnic communities, Hanoi’s cafe…And every a few months, we organize an event with traditional performances such as: Cheo, Xam, Chau Van…to spread the love of Vietnam’s culture to others. Being in groups or organizations with someone who share the same passion make you explore your interest and raise it bigger. Without groups, people still can develop their own interests, but nothing can be greater than having truly friends who share the same direction. It’s a second reason why groups or organizations are important to us.
In particular, groups give us value opportunities to build social skills and learn plenty of things from other members. For example, being a part of a group and join in its activities, we learn to how to cooperate with other members and be responsible for what we do. Or taking charge of an important role in your group, we train our abilities to inspire people, lead them, and face with high pressure. Addition, friends in group are new worlds for us to discover. From their experience, perspectives and knowledge, we can learn many value things. For example, you like piano, but never have the change to try it, then you realize your new friends in groups is a pianist. You can ask her to teach you play. Or you are a good writer, but have no idea about designing a poster. In contrast, you friend is a designer, but bad at expressing ideas in words. You both can collaborate to help each other better or may can publish your own newspapers. Groups are important because they bring us new friends and also new teachers in life.
To summarize, involving in groups and organizations benefit people in many aspects. Three of them are to communicate, to share common interests, and to learn more. Clearly, groups are indispensable part in our lives. However, we shouldn’t only expect to gain something from group, because its value comes from what we contribute to them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'at least', 'for example', 'in contrast', 'in particular', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247058823529 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.141176470588 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0980392156863 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0196078431373 0.046263068375 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0640522875817 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100653594771 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0235294117647 0.0351676179071 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87156059372 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.040522875817 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0483660130719 0.0887237588012 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143790849673 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0156862745098 0.0139019557991 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3877.0 2387.08602151 162% => OK
No of words: 634.0 408.028673835 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11514195584 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01790360848 4.48200974243 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380126182965 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261829652997 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173501577287 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134069400631 0.112833075102 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87156059372 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 316.0 212.727598566 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498422712934 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 62.956271811 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6684587814 169% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1142857143 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4119598917 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.771428571 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1142857143 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.514285714286 0.644075263715 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 44.297251014 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.6511627907 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44244290162 0.300154397459 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0751483938778 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0580652056998 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.408996144812 0.497263757937 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112133069986 0.151897553556 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15808664596 0.114077575197 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110995932316 0.0781384742642 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.442920231053 0.336927656856 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0444147140026 0.067059652881 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334016141724 0.210909579961 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522478289142 0.0618886996521 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 29.0 11.8870967742 244% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 26.0 8.42114695341 309% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 32.0 13.6433691756 235% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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