High salary job or job with lots of holidays
Nowadays, we witness lots of jobs in our society that each of them has special features like high income or even job with lots of holidays. In this way, some people would rather go to job with high salary while others tend to go to job with plenty of holidays. From my point of view, people should go to job with notable revenue since they can have the better life and they are able to establish a great relationship with others as well. My arguments for these points are explained as follows.
First, if you get the high salary in your job, you will be able to invest your money. Actually you can use it in the best way. For instance, if you receive twenty thousand dollars per month, you can invest your money in the big projects such as building a new hospital. As a result, you can earn more money after several years by the hospital project. In addition, with considerable income you can meet your basic needs readily because you have lots of money and you will not concern in your life. To give an example, imagine that you want to go to buy a new T-shirt so if you have more money you will buy an expensive T-shirt with the best quality undoubtedly. However, if you do not have enough money you cannot afford to buy high quality products.
Second, by your money you can have the best relationship with other people. In other words, if you earn money you can have the best friendship but if you do not be rich person you are not able to have lots of friends. As a matter of fact, most people like to have a wealthy friends not a poor friends therefore is clear that if you get high income you can have many friends. Furthermore, you can have a great relation with skillful colleagues if you work in the companies that give the noticeable revenue to their workers since usually in these companies most of the workers are expert because just adept workers deserve to obtain high salary. Thus, if you work in those companies you can have a great relationship with important persons that would be a useful relation for you.
All in all, from what I have discussed, these days, there is plenty of works near us with various features. Some of them have great salary or some of them have many holidays. Under this condition, most people prefer to go to job with notable income but others prefer a job with lots of holidays. In my opinion, job with the remarkable income would be better for people because not only can they have the best life but also they are able to make a lot of friends and having a great relationship with them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...act, most people like to have a wealthy friends not a poor friends therefore is clear t...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...ke to have a wealthy friends not a poor friends therefore is clear that if you get high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41063829787 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26012034116 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412765957447 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3605425385 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.65 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245825188729 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104950398823 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126781648102 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217326990315 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154041965934 0.0645574589148 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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