How do movies or television influence people’s behavior?
Nowadays, most people would like to spend their free times doing various activities such as reading newspaper, joining a club and of course watching television. In my opinion, the latter has had the most significant influence on people’s behavior based on three main reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
The first and most important reason why I think television has changed our life dramatically is that it uses the most advanced tools to send a clear message to us. For example, they employ visual effects and other ways to convince people to purchase a specific product. In my country, the use of cosmetics has increased significantly in the past two decades. According to the latest researches, this phenomenon is due to extensive commercial programs in television. In addition, movies actors and stars use cosmetic products a lot in their shows or movies and it undoubtedly influence our women’s behavior.
As a second reason I would like to mention that the aggressive behavior in children and teenagers has also enhanced. Nowadays, youth are exposed to fictional movies that have aggressive characters and at the end of movie, these characters are rewarded rather than punished. Children usually want to imitate their manners and it has bad consequences on their mental and social skills. In addition, the rate of nose and other beauty surgeries is surprisingly high among teenagers in my country which is due to the fashion programs that are displayed in television every day.
Finally it is important to bear in mind that, the invention of television was definitely one of the most important achievement of human in the past century. Before invention of this magic box, the life was extremely boring but now people can watch comic movies with their families, laugh with them and enjoy their weekends. They can also get some valuable information about different issues like environment and how to preserve it by watching useful programs. Nowadays, people are more aware of environmental problems.
Taking all the aforementioned into account it can be concluded that, movies or television has changed people’s behavior both positively and negatively in ways which I outlined them above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24512534819 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91758230867 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573816155989 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6057970136 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6875 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309465884706 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786182846164 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783655824256 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161826069889 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595060721334 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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