How do movies or TV affect people?
Rapid changes and complexity of today's world represent new challenges and put new demands on the societies. Media is counted as of the utmost important alterations, so it plays the crucial role in people's life. Therefore, the attitude toward the influence of TV as an integral part of each media is entirely varied. A plethora of individuals is in a conviction that Television has incredibly positive impact on the communities. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that TV has some inevitable harmful consequences for the families. I am of the opinion that, all these views have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, undoubtedly, TV is still the most important medium; thus no one can overlook the profound impact it can have on public awareness which is the primary function of utilizing the TV. It has been applied by diverse sources - governmental or non-governmental organizations - in order to promote the knowledge of people. For instance, if the particular disease becomes prevalent in the specific region, all people get informed thanks to various news stations; consequently, they can take appropriate actions to prevent them from getting involved in that problem. Furthermore, getting acquainted with spectacular sites around the world is another interesting usage of TV that allows people that not only improve their information but also pass their free time in the best possible way. That is why TV has a lot of advocates nowadays, and the growing segment of people are keen to spend their extra time watching their favorite programs on TV.
Another crucial fact which should be taken into consideration is that the broad usage of TV brings its negative implications. For example, families have less conversation together as they prefer to allocate their time follow their series. The young couple starts watching TV immediately after they arrive home. Children do not spend adequate time for their assignment owing to the famous match that is going to be shown on TV. As a result, the whole family members do not appreciate the close emotional ties within them same as the past. In addition, regardless of some warnings, TV programs are not categorized for specific age groups, so the teenagers or even children at early ages can watch the programs that are not appropriate for their ages. This issue is the matter of concern for many countries so that they are seeking to find applicable solutions to adjust this obstacle.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that admittedly TV affects the human's life significantly both negative and positive. It seems that if people and families control their desires not to utilize excessively TV programs, its advantages outweighs its disadvantages.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250497017893 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.159045725646 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101391650099 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.051689860835 0.046263068375 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0497017892644 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121272365805 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0417495029821 0.0351676179071 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9149857817 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218687872763 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107355864811 0.0887237588012 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119284294235 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013916500994 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2846.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 462.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16017316017 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372294372294 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309523809524 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218614718615 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151515151515 0.112833075102 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9149857817 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58658008658 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 73.5949121936 59.2087087015 124% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.515399573 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.3 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 54.0523809524 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.58778625954 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987132749929 0.300154397459 33% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0818377879111 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.04885146987 0.0752933317313 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496499416319 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0981318667752 0.151897553556 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428919789177 0.114077575197 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340910990569 0.0781384742642 44% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.430794398953 0.336927656856 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0806368645721 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761672147468 0.210909579961 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323822457021 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.