If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
People always want to have best things in the world and they try to achieve their goals. Sometimes people should choose and take a decision for their lives in a short time. Some people prefer to wait for the better chance of getting a job. However, others hold the opposite view that they should take the opportunity to get a secure job right away. Among the two opinions, I agree with former one more. I explain my reasons in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, the condition's work of different countries is not suitable because nowadays the workers compete for jobs hardly. Thus, do people find the opportunity to get a secure job, they will take it as soon as possible. For example, a few years ago, I found a job in the computer company but, I preferred to continue my study in university so that I did not get this job and I informed my friend for this opportunity and she got it. And now I finish my studies and I cannot find a good job while, my friend took a lot of advantages to hire in that company.
Another reason that I think has a merit to attention is that when people want to wait for a great job, they will face stress in their lives and they suffer from mental and physical disease during this time. Therefore, I think that it is important that people choose a simple life without difficulties. For instance, my brother is a very strict person and three years ago he thought that should find the very good job in an important company. After a while, he could not satisfy with the suggestive jobs so that he got depressed.
Last but not least, if a person chooses a secure job, he can get promotion in this job in the future so he will be successful and satisfy about getting this job. In other words, people must pay attention to everything not only their desires because the condition of future will change.
To sum up, from what I discussed above, I safely come to this conclusion that I insist that people should take a secure job right away and they do not live in the dream. Because today the condition of life and work is difficult and they do not feel a pressure for lack of an excellent job. That is why, I agree with this statement that do people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
People always want to have best things in the world and they try to ach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41527446301 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38227286351 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458233890215 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9565502763 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3684210526 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484175701038 0.236089414692 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162365590006 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127864561072 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297576971653 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1051011895 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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