Imagine that you are preparing for a holiday. You plan to be away from your home for a week. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
If I go to trip and there will be one additional thing, which I take, of course it would be my smart phone. Due to its paramount, they have become essential part of our life. We shape our life and make it easy by the help of smart phones
First, they help us to find a place which we want to go. When you plan to go somewhere or lost your way, you can use it; therefore, It is good to have it to find your way. Take my own example, I have visited Paris several times. Every time I tried to go somewhere, I discovered different places by the help of my smart phone. Moreover, these journeys increased my knowledge about Paris streets and avenues.
Secondly, communication has always played significant role in each person’s life. It is also vital for me to communicate with my family while I am away from my house. I can call my family or text them and share my experiences, if I have smartphone during my holiday. That is, they make our life more comfortable.
Thirdly, in addition to the importance of communication and navigation, there is another subtle reason. Sharing pictures on social media platforms is so popular among the Young. You can share your pictures on social media namely Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. It helps to manage your accounts.
To sum up, taking all aforementioned reasons in to the account, one cannot deny the important of smart phone in our life. Not only on a holiday but also on our daily routine, life can be boring without it. They make us happy and help us when we really need a help.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...he help of smart phone. First, they help us to find a place which we want to go. When you p...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are another reasons'?
Suggestion: there are another reasons
...artphone during my holiday. Thirdly, there is another reasons which make them enjoyable. You can shar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53306429331 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4519312549 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.8823529412 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201703393023 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556246478056 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742199303748 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999993877392 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295783188897 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.