Introduce your abilities to others in order to have successful life
Nowadays, we witness many people around us that each of them has specific abilities. In this way, some people believe that if we introduce our abilities to the others, we will have a prosperous life. From my point of view, people should inform their talents and their abilities to the other people because they can establish the best relationship with others and they will be able to earn money as well. My arguments for these points are explained as follows.
First, most people prefer to have knowledgeable friends therefore if you apprise other people from your abilities you can make many friends. Actually, people will respect you due to the fact that you are a capable person. In addition, if people know about your talents, they can get help from you. For example, if your neighbors in your area know that you have an ability in piping, they may request you to repair their piping system. As a result, you can aid them and certainly after that you can have a kind relationship with them.
Second, telling about your abilities to other persons can provide a lot of job opportunities for you. For instance, if you tell to your friends that you are capable of speaking English, your friends may suggest you a company that they need a expert person to translate their documents in English. Consequently, you can go to this job and earn money. However, if you did not inform your friend from your ability, you were not able to find a suitable job and obtain money. Furthermore, by introducing your talents to other persons you are able to participate in the new business. To give an example, imagine that one of your friends wants to establish the new company in order to export or importing products but he does not have enough knowledge to start this job. In this way, you can tell your friend that you have a degree on MBA field so your friend will be happy and will try to establish the company with assist of you. Consequently, you can receive money by working in your friend's company.
All in all, from what I have discussed, these days, we have many kinds people in our society that each person has different kinds of abilities. Some people think that we should inform other persons about our abilities. In my opinion, telling about abilities and talents to others, would be a great idea for all persons since not only can they have a good relation with people but also they will be able to attain money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63488372093 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40956382706 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43488372093 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5052365535 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.65 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236200667608 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877010204404 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658672932744 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150982620222 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311754484295 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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