It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It is important for any individual to have a neighborhood without much difficulties. Hence it is important to take pertinent decision regarding any events related to our neighborhood. Certainly some people would support the idea of building a large shopping center in your neighborhood. But in my view, I will definitely oppose the plan to build a large shopping center in my neighborhood. The factors for the above decisions are explained in the below paragraphs.
First of all, Building a larger shopping center near my neighborhood would definitely increase the traffic congestion and our road lanes might be compromised to provide enough space. The large shopping center would attract voluminous crowd of the people subsequently increasing the traffic congestion. Most of the times during the festival like Christmas and New-year, it would be very tedious to travel in the road. In view of example, I can recall the development in locality after the construction of larger shopping mall. My native town is in the outskirts of Chennai one of the metropolitan cities in India, when I was in school days me and my friends used to play in the streets. After the onset of the new mall the road became very congested, we are forced to quit playing in the roads. Hence I oppose the idea to build a larger shopping center in my neighborhood.
In addition to traffic congestion, the population around my neighborhood would increase sumptuously. In most part of the world, shopping complex are considered as the epitome for development and luxury. Hence large number of people are likely to move into neighborhood. This will certainly lead to many adverse effects like increase in cost of living. To illustrate the above point, I would again recall the development of my native places explained in the previous paragraph, before the onset of the shopping mall there were many small and affordable shops. But after the completion of the shopping mall many drastic changes happened in my locality like price of a slice of bread loaf increased from 5 INR to 10 INR, this is almost 200% increase in price. Many of friends moved to much smaller locality, since their parents couldn’t afford this cost of living. Hence I strong oppose building a new shopping mall in my locality as I might increase the cost of living.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that in most of the cases, building a larger shopping center will definitely cause many adverse impacts. So I oppose the idea of building a larger shopping in my neighborhood.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...dividual to have a neighborhood without much difficulties. Hence it is important to ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...neighborhood without much difficulties. Hence it is important to take pertinent decis...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...re forced to quit playing in the roads. Hence I oppose the idea to build a larger sho...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...the epitome for development and luxury. Hence large number of people are likely to mo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...uldn't afford this cost of living. Hence I strong oppose building a new shopping...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, regarding, so, in addition, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97916666667 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88674299307 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456018518519 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.486356415 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7727272727 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17648487054 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062467316932 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652328048648 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122879342721 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540676729205 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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