It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built
in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific
reasons and details to support your answer.It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built
in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific
reasons and details to support your answer.
In last century population has been increasing so wildly. Because of recent increases humanity have been facing many problems. One of the most significant ones is that we don’t have enough space for entertainments. So Municipalities and their engineers are inclined to less populated neighborhoods and districts to build entertainment buildings such as movie theater. Movie theaters are being trended entertainment recently. I oppose this plan that a movie theater may have been built in our neighborhood for two main reasons that I’m going to mention them below.
We have been living in our neighborhood since I was 10 years old so it’s been 13 years. Our neighborhood is very quiet and peaceful. It’s one of the few less populated districts have been left. If the mayor would have planned to build a movie theater in our neighborhood, it would have caused a massive chaos around here, since movie theater draws many people to this area. They will need the parking lot. Hence, the area will be crowded with a lot of cars and also, cars will increase air pollution. In addition, the presence of people here will cause lots of sound pollution. In conclusion, the peace and silence of our neighborhood will be destroyed.
The second reason for my opposition is that, so much crowd would have destroyed and damaged the rich nature of our neighborhood. Here we have a lot of fruit trees and gardens around here that they need to be protected from outsiders. People that are here for movie theater can cause harm to the trees and gardens. Also, the movie theater would have increase traffic. More traffic means harder transportation for civilians.
In conclusion, a movie theater in our neighborhood will cause many problems for civilian’s daily life and it will harm the nature and the environment in long term usage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pulation has been increasing so wildly. Because of recent increases humanity have been ...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had planned'?
Suggestion: had planned
... districts have been left. If the mayor would have planned to build a movie theater in our neighbo...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and the environment in long term usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02614379085 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87995097997 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0970307742 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208283228363 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730815767406 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642188853021 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137853854408 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640711737309 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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