It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
To develop whatever area, it’s necessary to build roads, buildings such as: hospitals, schools, restaurants… If a new restaurant may be built in my neighborhood, of course, I will support it. I have at least three reasons: it provides utility services for social, boost profits for the area’s economy, and changes its appearance in a modern way.
To begin with, I support the plan to build a new restaurant because it provides utility services for social. According to Maslow’s Hierarchy of Need, physical requirements are the most basic need of human. We all need energy to survive, and the only way to acquire this energy is from consumption and transformation of food. However, living in a busy life, many of us sometimes don’t have enough time to cook for ourselves. For example, after a hard-working day at office, we come home late with physical exhaustion and feel stressed. It’s when a restaurant can help. We can easily call for a cup of tea or something to fuel energy without wasting time to buy stuffs and cook with a hungry stomach. Having a restaurant in neighborhood can benefit us in other aspects like give us a place to hang-out with friends or celebrate parties.
Secondly, a new restaurant is opened will boost profits for the area’s economy. I live in the suburban area of Hanoi, so there are wide fields near my house. In recent year, some of them are bought, and backfilled to build companies, buildings… The phenomenon happens frequently because of effects of countryside’s modernization process. Some people think it causes farmers lose their lands and be out of jobs. But we also have known that, to start a business, the owner need to employ people for different positions. In this case, to open a new restaurant, he will need to hire chefs, waiters, guards, accountants…Therefore, the plan will create more job opportunities for local people. Additionally, the restaurant is not only served people who live around it, but also the visitors. The success of the restaurant will gain much profit to the area where it is located.
Last but not least, the existence of a new restaurant can change the area’s appearance. As I mention before, the new restaurant is build will provide many services for the community around it. Furthermore, when other companies want to start their business in an area, they will consider this point. Opening a supermarket, for instance, certainly no one want to build it in quiet places. People would prefer somewhere near residential areas, and also have developing services. Or, when the new restaurant attract customers, other people will think they can gain much money from start business there. As a result, many other services will be opened near the restaurant. It can change the area’s appearance and make it more develop in a modern way.
In conclusion, I support the plan to build a new restaurant in my neighborhood for all of the reasons I have mentioned. However, the qualification of services, foods, the waste management and methods of waste disposal are also important. Only if the enterprise really care about the customer’s health, and commit to protect the environment, they will receive the support of local people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ire chefs, waiters, guards, accountants…Therefore, the plan will create more job opportun...
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Suggestion: the surrounding community
...is build will provide many services for the community around it. Furthermore, when other companies want...
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Suggestion: all the
...a new restaurant in my neighborhood for all of the reasons I have mentioned. However, the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll receive the support of local people.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'at least', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'of course', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243491577335 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.137825421133 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0781010719755 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382848392037 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0581929555896 0.0685040099705 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10719754977 0.118717715034 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0199081163859 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08364087661 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321592649311 0.0309702414327 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0857580398162 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0275650842266 0.0209618222197 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00918836140888 0.0139019557991 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3264.0 2387.08602151 137% => OK
No of words: 536.0 408.028673835 131% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08955223881 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358208955224 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279850746269 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199626865672 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147388059701 0.112833075102 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08364087661 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503731343284 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 60.678099323 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4827586207 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5575599745 48.84282405 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.551724138 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4827586207 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.655172413793 0.644075263715 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 46.4678332476 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.58169934641 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197647770929 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0918250814594 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0696395506245 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458514785406 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132388008606 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759044417885 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549843868065 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.402674839544 0.336927656856 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0700985397743 0.067059652881 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150545947874 0.210909579961 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366195015686 0.0618886996521 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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