It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The construction of a new restaurant in my neighborhood will have a tremendous effect on the people who live here. The restaurant can benefit the residents in the economic and social aspects of life. Therefore, I personally oppose the opening of the restaurant. There are a few reasons for that.
First of all, the construction will create new jobs. The work in a restaurant does not require to have a seasoned personnel. Not skilled students could find a part-time job in the restaurant. It would be very advantageous for them since the part-time employment could give them an opportunity to study and make some money to pay their students loans simultaneously. If the students pay their educational bills while studying in a college, they have a chance to graduate without huge financial debts. Besides, after the graduation, the young professionals could spend their salaries on purchasing a house or on traveling, but not on paying out their students loans. Although students have to focus mostly on their classes, nowadays, they have to think of the ways to pay back the educational debts in advance. To that end, the building of a new restaurant will be economically beneficial for the students who live nearby.
Secondly, the new restaurant can become a nice place for locals to gather. New cuisine could be represented in the restaurant. People like trying something new, so they could explore the new tastes and flavors in that place. Moreover, if the food is delicious in the restaurant, people can get together there with their families and friends regularly. For example, a lot of people like sharing their leisure time with the ones they love in small family restaurants. This way, the people build strong connections with each other and make memories. Even sometimes, people prefer to gather outside and enjoy the nature, in the winter time, the warm and cozy restaurant would be a great place to hang out with families and friends. Therefore, the opening of the restaurant can help people to socialize.
To conclude, I think that if a new restaurant may be built in my neighborhood, local residents would be fascinated by the idea. This is because it will provide the dwellers with valuable job opportunities and with the place to connect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, even so, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98412698413 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87818043606 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513227513228 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2646462239 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6363636364 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120971584853 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428403011516 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443769289308 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972387443111 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044427788527 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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