Is it important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently?
Upon the question is it important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently, different people have different opinions based on their emotions, educations, cultures, etc. From my point of view, the most significant thing in this world is cooperation with other people. So that every person should know how to work in a group. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, working in groups has countless advantages for people. For instance, students can form groups and share their ideas or solutions about a particular challenge. Besides, they will benefit from their friend’s information in a group. If they want to do their homework, they will complete it in less time and in a more convenient way. In my opinion, students will learn how to behave toward others and listen to their comments in teams. On the contrary, students who are not able to cooperate with their classmates will have serious problems in future because they cannot stablish relationships with other people.
Secondly, these days, most businesses and corporations have numerous staff and they have to work in large groups. They should be able to negotiate and talk with their colleagues and reach a consensus which is beneficial for the company and help the company achieve its goals.
Last but not least, in my point of view, working in groups has another advantage for people. They can stablish a good relationship with group members, make new friends, talk about humorous things or make jocks. I think these activities help them feel happy or relaxed and have positive influences on their minds.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, it can be concluded that although working independently has some benefits such as more personal freedom, it is highly recommended to be able to work with a group of people because it has a lot of advantages for people which I outlined above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...world is cooperation with other people. So that every person should know how to work in...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended being'.
Suggestion: recommended being
... as more personal freedom, it is highly recommended to be able to work with a group of people bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96352583587 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77570013322 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5116174362 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0625 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393870356323 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120318941848 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140817510151 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242614217073 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138291696458 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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