In each stage of our life, we often move around from places to places. We went to elementary school in Medan, went to high school in Palembang, and finally took my undergraduate degree in Taiwan. These experiences taught me to become more adaptive and to keep making new friends in each place. We should keep making new friends and expand our social circle rather than only befriend with people from the past.
We need to expand our networks by making new acquaintances as our life progressed. If we know more people and befriend with them, we can work together with them to solve problems. Most of the professional job today rely on connections to boost our career positively. For example, scientists and professors collaborate with other people from different institutions or disciplines to accelerate their research. In this way, we get two objectives, firstly, we can solve research problems faster and secondly, the resulting works can boost our career. This is true for other professions as well. This is why we need to make new friends.
Making new friends also bring personal satisfaction to our life. New friends give us new colors and perspectives. They also more reliable and helpful when we come into troubles. When our life progressed, we often rare to see our old friends. They may work or live in a different place with us and thus we cannot be in touch with them so often like in the past time. We only see them if we visit them to their places or in reunion events.
In conclusion, making new friends brings more benefits both personally and professionally. They can bring some new views and make a more culturally-rich life. In the same way, new friends also can provide us a path so we can reach our top career in a faster way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... We went to elementary school in Medan, went to high school in Palembang, and fi...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...in touch with them so often like in the past time. We only see them if we visit them to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7385620915 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71063016892 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522875816993 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8276298086 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240679147761 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953090075365 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996896780912 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172510667747 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577083059088 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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