life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
To determine what period of life that it is easier and comfortable is controversial issue in third millennium. Although some people say that life is better and easier than life in many years ago, old man or woman say that their cycle, life is more comfortable that now. There are pivotal reasons for investigating matter.
In recently years, increasing cost of living require to hard working. So, people should have two or more jobs for spending their life. When grandparents were children, people could have only one career and living were easier than now. For example, if one man worked in post...
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say that their cycle, life is more comfortable that now.
say that in their cycle, life is more comfortable than that now.
increasing cost of living require to
increasing cost of living requires to
Sentence: And he could purchase house, car and all equipment of life, without that her wife worked.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to that and her
Sentence: Industrial has important role in people's life.
Description: The fragment Industrial has is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Industrial with adverb
Sentence: And we know that it progress very quickly every years.
Description: The word progress is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to progress
Sentence: For example, inventions of cars were an industrial revolution in world.
Description: The fragment an industrial revolution is not usually preceded by were
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace were with was
Sentence: And they must traveled for seeing them.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to must and traveled
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 314 350
No. of Characters: 1537 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.21 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.895 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.649 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.137 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.263 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.455 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5