Nowadays,people become more and more concerning the education, especially the high education. Thus there are many students would like to study in foreign countires. This different expcerince for them is very attractive. because on a different stage, perhaps even higher than the home coutries', they can get cultivated more comprhensively. I will address my views as follows,
First of all, for some students from the devleloped countries, the different experince could be an important memory for them. I've met lots of foreign fridends from western europe study in China. They told me that China is a country of history, they can learn some traditional culture here. For them it would be impossible to learn these knowlege in their own country. Because besides the books in the universities, people in China are walking history to them, they can communicate with lots of native people to learn more about China. Let alone there are so many historical relics they can visit. What's more one of my friends from England was fond in Chinese Food. She told to me evertytime she wnt back to Manchester, she would miss the Chinese snacks so much. Surely there are many things in China grasping these foreign students, this exotic feelings would be their valuable treasures.
Secondly, for some students from the developing countries like me, studying abroad is a golden chance to broaden our views. The advanced knowledge is the first reason we would like to study abroad, as students from China, there are so many technology fields we can study becaue the the knowlege in these area is far behind other countries. Moreover, it is also a priceless exprince for us to explore the countries. And the last thing is we can make lots of foreign friends in the universities aborad. GIven this advantage the college life would be totally interesting for us.
Finally, due to the development of our society, it is more and more difficult to find jobs in my country. Thus for many people, a foreign university degree would be better whe napplying for jobs. Once I visited my college website, there was a news about the new teachers in my major mechanical engineering, most of them had foreign studying experince. This indicated that when I apply for jobs, a foreign degree would be more convincing to the companies or universities I would apply for.
In all, there are lots of advatanges of studying abroad.Because it is the human nature of trying somehting different, besides, as students, the better oppurtunity to study is the main reason.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98349056604 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74882151356 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516509433962 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2658288615 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8695652174 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4347826087 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145410603757 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458349749861 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526971250537 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939002003054 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459714672108 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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