Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad?
These days, most men and women would like to go to universities and colleges. While some students prefer to attend schools and universities inside their home countries and have very convincing reasons for what they do, most of them choose foreign universities. From my point of view, studying abroad has numerous advantages for students and in the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, countless western universities have advanced equipment or facilities, prominent professors, high reputation and so forth. They provide the best environment for students to obtain knowledge and broaden their horizons. According to the latest researches which were published in well-known journals, students with a MSc degree from a high-ranked university have no difficulties finding jobs. Companies and corporations are willing to hire them since they can benefit from their information.
In the second place, some students would like to study abroad because they want to meet new people and make friends with different cultures or backgrounds. They can live with their friends in dormitory rooms and become familiar with other countries and their traditions. In addition, they can try international foods, participate in foreign social events like concert, etc.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that although living abroad has a lot of advantages, it has numerous drawbacks. For example, some students become homesick or cannot adapt themselves with the new environment. In my opinion, these difficulties have positive effects on their lives because they will prepare students for future problems and make them mature. Furthermore, they will be independent and get valuable experiences.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons into account, it can be concluded that students prefer to study in foreign countries because it has many benefits for them which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, first of all, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9382803814 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6894474687 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282816653999 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088818322419 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790578073557 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158220360576 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752946899667 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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